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Hello! So, I'm turning a comic I wrote as a child into a novel, and here's a preview: "Ralph took a deep breath, then closed his eyes, but only for a moment. He then thrust his arms into the air and yelled, “Urgon!”. When he opened his eyes again, Rudy noticed something. Something upsetting. Something peculiar. Something like she’d never seen before in her entire time on this planet. Ralph's eyes had changed. Where his iris and pupil once were, was a horizontal line. Like a frogs’ eye, only it belonged to a human. Rudy was astonished. She could not believe what she was seeing. She let out a gasp, that was louder than she intended it to be. Ralph heard her and let out a small grunt. He put his hand up to his ear. Rudy covered her mouth with her hands. Her heart was pounding inside her chest. Beating 100 miles per hour. Buh-boom. Buh-boom. Buh-boom. Rudy’s instincts were telling her to do one thing. It was to get out of there. And fast." Any feedback?

Hello everyone! I have some very exciting news!! My book is getting published by barnes and noble! I am so happy, and wanted to share it with you. Have an awesome day!

I hope you all had happy holidays and a fun new year!💙

1. Lots of stuff but I got some funko pops , earrings , a bed set , pictures , toe socks!!(awesome) 2 . prob moving 22 hours from where I was born ( but 10 from where I lived ) 3.prob November its my birthday month! 4.YASSS! 5 . I'm not sure but I just read the new baby sitters club graphic novel and I love it!!!😍

Hi Guys!! I'm back with few questions for this week!! 1) What did you get for Christmas?? (If you don't celebrate Christmas, How is your winter-break going so far?) 2) What was one memorable thing that you did this year? 3) What was your favorite month? Why? 4) Are you excited for 2021?? 5) What is your favorite book that makes you comfortable during winter? My Answers: 1) 2 hairbrush, a phone, and a table kind of thing that is movable. 2) Moving to a new place. 3) My favorite month this year was December because I had a lot of good memories with my family and friends. (except the COVID situation...) 4) Yes!! 5) I like to read or watch Harry Potter series because it is my all time favorite book series!! I hope you had a great year!!